ROUGH CUT 3

 Below are our changes made after receiving feedback on our second rough cut. 

- added idents

- added titles

- created a hand of god opening inspired by Cherry Falls (2000)

- added a colour filter to the street scene

- cut out shots in the forest scene for time

- tightened or zoomed out shots to flow better

- shortened clips when Marion was calling for Norman to follow Barthes' action codes

- removed the phone dialling for time 

- cross cut phone call

- added a POV shot

- added a temporary Psycho (1960) slashing sound effect

- added the main title 

- ended the locker scene with Mandy's foot stepping on a missing poster

Here is the written feedback we received from the other media students: 

- Ident needs to be reshot; add music, remove shake, maybe use a time-lapse 

- The titles are too quick

- The opening sequence is too quick

- Opening sequence needs to be reshot as it is too dark and shaky

- The font for connecting words should be different (title convention)

- Spacing between titles needs to be the same

- Add an audio-bridge to the final ident

- Ident order should be switched in order to keep the sound