ROUGH CUT 4

Below are our changes made after receiving feedback on our third rough cut. 

- Switched the ident order and changed the font for Skyscraper Productions

- Added an audio-bridge to the final ident

- Made text for linking words smaller in the larger titles (title convention) in order for the company and director/producer names to stand out 

- Made title length longer

- Reshot the Cherry Falls (2000) hand of god, recreated shots more closely and in the daytime as previous shots were dark and shaky, previous shots were also too quick

- Recreated the Friday The 13th (1980) music on GarageBand

- Crosscut of director and producer titles with the opening of the street scene

- Re-edited the street scene

- Re-edited the burial scene to make it lighter and have longer cross-cuts

- Removed appearing effect on the main title

- Added piano recreation of "Killer Queen" for the locker scene

- Edited locker scene lighting for it to appear colder

Here is the written feedback we received from the other media students: 

- Change title wording (present not presents)

- Linking title words should be in a different font 

- Titles are too stretched over the screen

- Don't show houses in shots (oppositional reading of preferred isolated and small town reading), tighten the shots more

- Tower should be centrally framed

- Add a town sign to recreate Cherry Falls (2000)  sequence, and to anchor preferred small town reading

- Locker scene lighting is too bright

- Running looks sped up and comedic (another oppositional reading)

- Norman is repeated too many times and sounds redundant

- Necklace dropping shot is shaky

- Zoom into Marion lying on the floor full of blood (background is too dark)

- Remove "the next day" from the locker scene